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2years ago I and my family went to the sea when I walked at beach I heard someone screamed loudly I was very exited what happen at there I `m very curius the other people gathered at the beach that they are very worry like me I went to crowded after I ask some person what happen? he said me one boy drowning at the sea when I was talking to him the man swam and tried to save him I wandered why the boy drown? at the same time I thought about it I heard the men said go away go away fortunately the rescue team came and          gave him artificial respiration

The effects of an important event in your life

                                   Moving away from my family for study

       Sometimes some events can change one's life in many aspects. Living in a city far from home is one of the events that can bring many consequences and effects which almost always change a student's form of life. This event has happened to me since I passed the university entering exam. I had to go to another city about three years ago. I had two choices, living in a dormitory with four or five roommates or living in a rental house with one or two persons. Because it was hard for me to live in a dormitory for four years, I and two other girls rented a house and we started our life in a new house and city. At the beginning it was difficult for me because I would live no longer with my family and I had to learn how to live in harmony with others, how to do things by myself, how to move to other places, etc. Moving away from my family and living in another city had some positive and negative effects on me.

        One of the positive effects of living away from home was the independent behavior that grew inside of me. Living on my own far from my family gave me a lot of experiences toward organizing my life. Since it was up to me and no one else to organize my expenses, pay the bills and go shopping for home. Another positive effect of moving away from my family was responsibility. Before going to the university, my mother did the household chores but after moving to another city and entering my new house I learned to become responsible. In fact my roommates and I shared the responsibility for doing household chores. Being independent and responsible helped me to gain self confidence and try hard to achieve my goals in life.

          But moving away from my family had negative effects, too. Missing my family was the worst thing that I encountered with. At first it was really difficult for me to live far from them. I visited them once in a week and sometimes twice in a month, but gradually I got used to that situation. Another bad result of living far from my family was that I had to do all of the household activities by myself without my mother's or my sisters' help. I had to wash the dishes, clean the house, cook the food and the worst thing that was taking out the garbage.

          Living far from home, even for a short period of time, can be really hard at the beginning. During that time I learned how to be independent and responsible. It was difficult to live without my parents and in another city, but that made me learn how to stand on my own two feet and how to appreciate what I have like my parents and my belongings. Besides, I get to appreciate the things I achieve during my life because I've learned that my goals can't be achieved easily.

 

           

 

First draft of observing of someone who is drowning

     It was a really beautiful morning and I was in a good mood. My family and I decided to go to the beach on the weekend to have fun after a busy week. I was sure that we could have a really fantastic day on the beach but something terrible happened that ruined our day. When we arrived the seaside there were lots of people who enjoyed their time.

going to the university has  lots of advantage for every people.going to the medical university is one of the important event in my life that made me a different person.there are a lot of reason that i become a different person first of all i learned how to communicate with people that their culture were different from me.before that when i was in school all the students in class were belonged to a one city and we were together for every days and for some years and i was accustomed to being with them and their morality but when i entered university i saw my classmates that they came from another city and most of them had a different attitude or culture but i hadto adopted myselfe  and accepted them and it had a good effect on me because i had learned how to contact with people that they arent similar to me and i think now i can make new freinds better than before.

the another important changes in my personality was about my fear and impatient. i learned how to controll myself in a dangerous or emergency times. in my idea this changes have  direct connection with my major because in university our teachers tought us how to controll ourselves in emergency times and how to contact with patient and comfort them because before that i never could controll myself in critical occasion and i always lost my controll i learned i should change my self and contorll if i didnt change i wouldnt be successful in my major.the most important advantage of going to the university that i learned was this the moment that want to save somebodys life it shouldnt be important for a doctor or nurse the patient personality. we shouldnt pay attention the patient is that rich or poor or their skin colors we just concentarate to save their lifes without consider our interests.i underestand i should change my point of view when i want to be agood helper.as we all know going to the univesity have benefits for every person but if we want to learn something from university it depends on our attempt for changing and improving.